[“Actually, this is your phone” sambil menghulurkan phone di tangan kirinya.
“and, this is mine” sambil menunjukkan screen phone ditangan kanannya. Ada gambar dia dengan seorang perempuan. Cantik.]
Musykil2.. Kata ada gambar dia dgn perempuan cantik??kat cite ni xde pon story psl zafrul izhar tuh da end up dgn ppuan tu.. plus,izhar kata dia in love dgn ayunie since 1st the met.tp Izhar ada ‘ppuan cantik’ tuh.. so,ni ke cinta..?? semudah itu menggantikan cinta yg lain..?? Tentang Cinta mmg cuma yg rasa akan faham.. Tapi Ketentuan Tentang Cinta kan tak semua indah.. Tentang Cinta sentiasa menuntut air mata.. Itu lah Tentang Cinta..
“kat cite ni xde pon story psl zafrul izhar tuh da end up dgn ppuan tu.. plus,izhar kata dia in love dgn ayunie since 1st the met.tp Izhar ada ‘ppuan cantik’ tuh.. so,ni ke cinta..?? semudah itu menggantikan cinta yg lain..??”
how u know d gurl is Izhar’s love??
maybe his mother or sister..who knows..
d writer didnt mentioned anything about d gurl..just write “Ada gambar dia dengan seorang perempuan. Cantik”
just a sentence n u made a conclusion that d gurl is his special gurlfrenz..
my bro put my pict in his phone..coz we r so close.. is that made me as his special gurlfrenzz???
“Tapi Ketentuan Tentang Cinta kan tak semua indah.. Tentang Cinta sentiasa menuntut air mata”
why must have tears in Tentang Cinta???
why not everything look beautifull???
not just tears n beautiful in love..but have many things happened in love..laugh,anger,uncomfort,so comfort, n u know what??sometimes have rainbow in love..may u just know about tears..u better know about all of that..n tentang cinta will b so sweet n nice..
like cooking..not just sour or sweet.. but it can b great dishes like “sweet sour”..
😡 ops!! suyi.. emo kew?? zainab dear, im not angry..never been..
ya,i aware dat love wasnt juz being upset.. i knew, being in love is a feeling that i couldnt bare to lose..i’ve been in love..n cuz of love i live.. i realize dat.. but yet,cant deny that we’ll cry bcuz of cinta..
Menangis bila bersama dia..ketawa bila dia pergi..bduka bila dia kembali..dan senyum bila dia hilang semula..
Menangis bila bersamanya,krn takut kehilangan cintanya.. ketawa bila dia pergi,kerana Allah tak mentakdirkan dia utk kita..Pasti Allah dah suratkan yg lebih utk kita.. Bduka bila dia kembali,krn tau dia akan pergi lagi..seperti yg pnah dia lakukan dulu.. Dan senyum bila dia hilang semula, krn pasti ada ketentuan Allah tu lbh indah.. :x=|:-|;)
Ops! emo kew?? suyi..^:)^^:)^ zainab dear,im not angry.. :d ya,i aware that love is not all about crying in a middle of the nyte.. i knew love can make my life more completed that i ever dreamed it cud b..i realize how beautiful n wonderful it been..n bcuz of love i live..:)>-:x of cuz, being in love is a feeling that i cud bare to lose.. i’ve been in love.. still be..;)):x
but somehow,cant deny that [-x it seems like honesty means nothing to them..:^o:^o[-(=((=((:((:((:((l-)l-) i wish i cudb-(b-(.. padan muke!! 8-}8-}8-}
Tersenyum kala terluka,:)
menangis saat bahagia,:((
sedih bila bersama 8-|,
ketawa tika berpisah..:))
tersenyum biarpun terluka.:):-ss
kerana yakin Allah tidak menjadikannya untuk I.dan I redha.:)>-
manangis saat bahagia
kerana takut kebahagiaan itu akan sirna seperti bayu menyapa:-< :((
I pernah bersedih bila bersamanya :((
kerana I tak mahu kehilangan cintanya.
=((:((
I juga pernah ketawa tika berpisah
kerana sekali lagi, cinta tak harus memiliki..
Dan I pasti ada cinta lain untuk I..
ha.. nie la di namakn otak prempuan..
otak prempuan slalu nye akn pk bende yg selain dr yg diterangkn..which is good for certain2 things…
tp mcm nie leh wat pd prasaan curiga n prasangka..n yg ni yg xelok tu..
well…mse mrs teddy bce cter nie,mrs teddy juz assume yg pic tu adlah pic ayunie..coz mest la die pun xdpt nk tgk ngan jelas sape pic gurl tu kn? xkn la ade lctrer sje2 nk tayang pic org yg tsyg kat org len even pd tuan empunya nye coz blum declare pape lg kn?
so,xyah la pening2 ngan cter nie..
tp komen awk tu pntg tuk bantu penulis meningkatkn lg kualiti cter yg dihasilkn..thanx ya.. 🙂
xmgkin ar pic ayunie..sbb, dia kata : “Ada gambar dia dengan seorang perempuan” dorg kan br jek terserempak..lom knl lg..;):)>-:)>- cmne nk amik pic ssma kan kan kan..;)
Tul kata mrs teddy tuh..fateha pun ske mnulis..n ske bg kwn2 comment cerpen2 fateha..tp skg ney,da xrajen la mnulis..tu yg lg ske bca cerita org..:):d:-|
hmm~ logik gak..juz dlm cte ney,pnulis tuh describe cem dorg br knl.. since dia kata En Zafrul pensyarah baru kat u tuh.. hmm~ agaknyer la..:-?:-?:-?#-o#-o:d:d:d
I really like this short love story.:-?. Have you ever try in Novel writing? I love reading Malay book. If you tulis, iAllah I will buy it. I think you should start written for a longer version of love story, heheheh… ;). Your jalan cerita sangat menarek :)>- ..buat la citer2 len plak..
thanks 4 d nice comment…
saya dah siap 1 lg short story..
tp tak sempat nak hantar…heheheheh
i really love to write a novel..but not gud enough…
so just b short story writter is already give me some great feel…
but maybe someday..Insyallah…heheheh
wish u all d best to…
n thank u sooooo much…
Assalamualaikum…
ya allah best gle cpen nie…thru ati i cm i plak kt tmpt ayunie 2..:d:d:d…kn bgus klu 2 cte i…8-}8-}8-}8-}8-} thanks a lot to siti rahmah…i really loved it:x:x:x:x:x
are : thanks 4 d comment…my grammar was really bad…i know already…but as u know, in harvard n oxford…it doesnt matter with grammar n spelling as long as people can read n undrstand what u write about…n actually i dont really care with my grammar coz, i’m not a writter, i just wrote this cerpen coz i love cerpen n enjoyed with it….n as a programmar, it doesnt matter with all d grammar…heheheh…BUT…thank u so much….i accept ur opinion….thanks…
ima : when i wrote this cerpen, lagu tu belum keluar lagi rasanya…hehehehehehehe
hai siti rahmah. love ur story but i hv to agree with are. it’s really annoying when ur reading a nice story but there’s a lot of grammatical mistakes. klu nk mnulis dlm 2 bhs, i.e BM & English, kene ler well verse dlm dua2 sekali. baru la seronok kiter bace story tu & e2 gak mnunjukn penulis tu sorg yg bwibawa & byk knowledge. u don’t hv to graduate frm overseas uni to be a good writer but do a lot of readings in both languages to improve urself.
I myself love reading novels, Malay or English. So it’s important to master ur language b4 u start writing, k? hopefully u won’t be disheartened by my comments. keep it up & hopefully one day u can be a good writer, insya-allah.
Assalamualikum qiqi anura,
thanks 4 d comment…i’ll try my best to improve my language….
sebenarnya kalau nk tggu smpai kite nie benar2 master lm penulisan / bahsa or ect baru boleh nak mula menulis..sorry to say, sangat2 tak bersetuju…kalau kta tak mula sekarang…then nobody correct u(like u correct me) till d end pun kita tak kan berjaya & takkan tahu mana silap dan salah kita…
even chef wan pun bukan terus tiba2 jd no1 chef…rite….
frm bottom of my heart…thank u soooo much….kita tak kan berjaya kalau takde org band/puh kita…
to hunny luna, slver plannet & miera….thanks…..
saya akan cube send lagi love story kalau ade….
sebab now on…sgt2 sibuk dgn project…
i’m semi final programming student…writting is just a hobby where i can share wif people like all of u..hehehehe…thanks…
to qiqi anura & silver_planet : u all soooo funny….buleh ape nk buat cerita sendiri….bukan siapa pun tahu yg tu cerita tntng diri awak….semoga akan ada cerpen/karya oleh qiqi anura….Insyallah…
wish u all d best…
hmmm…tgk la siti, klu ade idea nk mnyinggah ni. si silver tu wat2 shy2 cat jew. aritu ms qiqi suggest kat die, bkn main suker ag dier. siap nk mintak royalti ag kat mr & mrs teddy. don’t shy2 ar my dear:x
hmm.. best gak cite ni.. sweet jer.. wlupun ade some2 part yg xbape jelas.. tpi mungkin tu mmg teknik penulis utk bgi saspens sket dlm kite menerima maksud yg tersirat dlm cite die.. yela.. lain org lain cara pemahaman die.. cth nye psl gmbr pompuan tu.. terserah kpd pembace tu sndiri nk kate pompuan tu adik die ke,bekas awek die ke,sepupu ke.. sape2 pon boleh.. penulis ni memberi ruang utk otak kite brfikir dan membuat kesimpulan sendiri.. jadi citer pun x plain jer.. xkan sume nk kene ade jwpan kn.. ape2 pon.. tabik spring kt penulis cite ni.. anda mmg berbakat.. idea bagus.. cume B.I tu perlu d perbaiki sket.. *maaf klu menyinggung penulis* sy harap anda akan terus berkarya.. all the best! chayo! n gambatte! peace.. salam..
it so sweet..cyte neyh besh sgt..andai saja dpt cinta sebegitu..aku syunk an kekasihku..die la cinta sejati ku awal dan akhir..maafkan daku selama percintaan kita yunk sntiasa diduga..cimie.. 😥 :XO:
dari 5 bintang bg 3..
jln cher di mmg bes
tp ad kureng gak..
tp klu jd dlm hidup kita nie alangkah beshnya
mmg brann sunggoh la dia punya lect nie..
mula2 men msg ja..
habaq nama ke2
pahtu bwu habaq nama ful
aku ja xdak sapa nak
huhuhuuh 😥 😥 😥
erm tp rasenye cinta dalam citer ni cinta yg memandang pd paras rupe je..coz die x kenal pon lg si ayunie tu kn,perangai die sume, alih2 nak ajak kawen..huhu..ade ke jd di alam nyata ni citer cmni, kalo ade so sweet..neway, nice trial siti fatimah..
lamanya tak singgah laman nie..
winduuuuuuuuuuuuuuu….
thanks to all comments…
thanks you sooo much….
Nuerol:: siti rahmah not fatimah,..
hehehehhehe
daisy:: bukan org slalu ckp dr mata turun ke hati???
sebagaimana cinta zulaikha pada Nabi Sulaiman…
tp lama2..peribadi jugak jd taruhan kan???
hehehhehehe
kan zfrul tu lect die..
sblm die aak kawin die slalu perhatikan ayunie kan???
die slalu msg kan???
dr situ die berani buat pertaruhan ajak berkahwin…
dlm cerpen..kite tak perlu mentioned semua nie..
tu sbb ia d pnggil cerpen…
nnti tggu sy tulis novel..1 satu sy tulis..
(kalaw sy tulis novel lah…)
sweet la cter nie.. @};- 😡
urm, tuh ler pasal, sweet giler….
(takde emoricon cair kew, hu3…)
Ada la… =p~
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he3.. u make my heart melt.. ;)) :p
Uwek… :p
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nk uwek jgak.. :p
Tiwu je owang…. 😐
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nk tiwu jgak ya.. 😐
haha, meyn2 laks mereka ini….=|
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hik3.. skali skala gurau2 :d
wah..bestla cte ni… rsa nk t’syum jeee 😡
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Jelesh la tu… 8-}
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hek eleh, ileks ar beb….haha :*
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a kiss? hahaha.. ;))
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huhu, silap tekan emoticon, haha, maaf….ingat dier juz wat muka senyum…huhu
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hik3.. xpe2..
tp leh cye ke alasan nie? :p
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:)>-
so sweet…
~cinta itu anugerah Ilahi~
hi mr n mrs teddy…
:d
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hye mia.. 🙂
how’s ur life? @};-
lamer x dgr citer… :d
so sweet…
sayangilah mereka yg menyintai kita dulu..itu lebih bermakna..
btol tu zan..:)
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yap.. btul2 🙂
is this story really sweet????
😕 😕
[“Actually, this is your phone” sambil menghulurkan phone di tangan kirinya.
“and, this is mine” sambil menunjukkan screen phone ditangan kanannya. Ada gambar dia dengan seorang perempuan. Cantik.]
Musykil2.. Kata ada gambar dia dgn perempuan cantik??kat cite ni xde pon story psl zafrul izhar tuh da end up dgn ppuan tu.. plus,izhar kata dia in love dgn ayunie since 1st the met.tp Izhar ada ‘ppuan cantik’ tuh.. so,ni ke cinta..?? semudah itu menggantikan cinta yg lain..?? Tentang Cinta mmg cuma yg rasa akan faham.. Tapi Ketentuan Tentang Cinta kan tak semua indah.. Tentang Cinta sentiasa menuntut air mata.. Itu lah Tentang Cinta..
ya lah…
ya right…
but why u should anger???
“kat cite ni xde pon story psl zafrul izhar tuh da end up dgn ppuan tu.. plus,izhar kata dia in love dgn ayunie since 1st the met.tp Izhar ada ‘ppuan cantik’ tuh.. so,ni ke cinta..?? semudah itu menggantikan cinta yg lain..??”
how u know d gurl is Izhar’s love??
maybe his mother or sister..who knows..
d writer didnt mentioned anything about d gurl..just write “Ada gambar dia dengan seorang perempuan. Cantik”
just a sentence n u made a conclusion that d gurl is his special gurlfrenz..
my bro put my pict in his phone..coz we r so close.. is that made me as his special gurlfrenzz???
“Tapi Ketentuan Tentang Cinta kan tak semua indah.. Tentang Cinta sentiasa menuntut air mata”
why must have tears in Tentang Cinta???
why not everything look beautifull???
not just tears n beautiful in love..but have many things happened in love..laugh,anger,uncomfort,so comfort, n u know what??sometimes have rainbow in love..may u just know about tears..u better know about all of that..n tentang cinta will b so sweet n nice..
like cooking..not just sour or sweet.. but it can b great dishes like “sweet sour”..
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😡 ops!! suyi.. emo kew?? zainab dear, im not angry..never been..
ya,i aware dat love wasnt juz being upset.. i knew, being in love is a feeling that i couldnt bare to lose..i’ve been in love..n cuz of love i live.. i realize dat.. but yet,cant deny that we’ll cry bcuz of cinta..
Menangis bila bersama dia..ketawa bila dia pergi..bduka bila dia kembali..dan senyum bila dia hilang semula..
Menangis bila bersamanya,krn takut kehilangan cintanya.. ketawa bila dia pergi,kerana Allah tak mentakdirkan dia utk kita..Pasti Allah dah suratkan yg lebih utk kita.. Bduka bila dia kembali,krn tau dia akan pergi lagi..seperti yg pnah dia lakukan dulu.. Dan senyum bila dia hilang semula, krn pasti ada ketentuan Allah tu lbh indah.. :x=|:-|;)
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Ops! emo kew?? suyi..^:)^^:)^ zainab dear,im not angry.. :d ya,i aware that love is not all about crying in a middle of the nyte.. i knew love can make my life more completed that i ever dreamed it cud b..i realize how beautiful n wonderful it been..n bcuz of love i live..:)>-:x of cuz, being in love is a feeling that i cud bare to lose.. i’ve been in love.. still be..;)):x
but somehow,cant deny that [-x it seems like honesty means nothing to them..:^o:^o[-(=((=((:((:((:((l-)l-) i wish i cudb-(b-(.. padan muke!! 8-}8-}8-}
Tersenyum kala terluka,:)
menangis saat bahagia,:((
sedih bila bersama 8-|,
ketawa tika berpisah..:))
tersenyum biarpun terluka.:):-ss
kerana yakin Allah tidak menjadikannya untuk I.dan I redha.:)>-
manangis saat bahagia
kerana takut kebahagiaan itu akan sirna seperti bayu menyapa:-< :(( I pernah bersedih bila bersamanya :(( kerana I tak mahu kehilangan cintanya. =((:(( I juga pernah ketawa tika berpisah kerana sekali lagi, cinta tak harus memiliki.. Dan I pasti ada cinta lain untuk I..
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ha.. nie la di namakn otak prempuan..
otak prempuan slalu nye akn pk bende yg selain dr yg diterangkn..which is good for certain2 things…
tp mcm nie leh wat pd prasaan curiga n prasangka..n yg ni yg xelok tu..
well…mse mrs teddy bce cter nie,mrs teddy juz assume yg pic tu adlah pic ayunie..coz mest la die pun xdpt nk tgk ngan jelas sape pic gurl tu kn? xkn la ade lctrer sje2 nk tayang pic org yg tsyg kat org len even pd tuan empunya nye coz blum declare pape lg kn?
so,xyah la pening2 ngan cter nie..
tp komen awk tu pntg tuk bantu penulis meningkatkn lg kualiti cter yg dihasilkn..thanx ya.. 🙂
“so,xyah la pening2 ngan cter nie..
tp komen awk tu pntg tuk bantu penulis meningkatkn lg kualiti cter yg dihasilkn..thanx ya.. ”
u r right mrs.teddy..:d:):d:):d:):d:):d:)
boring r cite cm nie…asyik2 t’lnggr pas 2 ad secret admire pas 2 b’cnta pas 2 kawen.
kehidupan x seindah nie.
“hanya mimpi yang betah menjadi indah”
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xmgkin ar pic ayunie..sbb, dia kata : “Ada gambar dia dengan seorang perempuan” dorg kan br jek terserempak..lom knl lg..;):)>-:)>- cmne nk amik pic ssma kan kan kan..;)
Tul kata mrs teddy tuh..fateha pun ske mnulis..n ske bg kwn2 comment cerpen2 fateha..tp skg ney,da xrajen la mnulis..tu yg lg ske bca cerita org..:):d:-|
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zaman skrg nie smue leh wat..
nampk mcm amik pic bsame pada hal amik asing2…
smue nye technology… :d
not bad….
teruskan bakat anda…..
u can do better than this story….
ok..:)>-
thanks yeah everybody…
i’ll improve all d weakness…
please keep support on me…:);)
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o…awak ke yg write story ni??
yup…
i am…
any comment???
just give ur comment…i’ll accept by my heart…
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hmm~ logik gak..juz dlm cte ney,pnulis tuh describe cem dorg br knl.. since dia kata En Zafrul pensyarah baru kat u tuh.. hmm~ agaknyer la..:-?:-?:-?#-o#-o:d:d:d
very nice n sweet cerpen 🙂
thanks nalisa…:)
Specially for Siti Rahmah..
I really like this short love story.:-?. Have you ever try in Novel writing? I love reading Malay book. If you tulis, iAllah I will buy it. I think you should start written for a longer version of love story, heheheh… ;). Your jalan cerita sangat menarek :)>- ..buat la citer2 len plak..
All the best!
Assalamualaikum…special to dewibiru…
thanks 4 d nice comment…
saya dah siap 1 lg short story..
tp tak sempat nak hantar…heheheheh
i really love to write a novel..but not gud enough…
so just b short story writter is already give me some great feel…
but maybe someday..Insyallah…heheheh
wish u all d best to…
n thank u sooooo much…
Assalamualaikum…
alahai…
jtoh ati gueh dgn ctew nie..
kan besh klu idop realiti cmni..
huhkhuhkhkhhkhk;)
siti rahmah..
andakah yg mnulis ctew nie..
cntek sgguh jln cerita dia..
we want more!
we want more!
ahahahahahaha=|
Assalamualaikum appleijau….
i will…Insyallah
thankssssssss…
love to read ur comment…
Best sangat…….sy pun ske nulis n bce cerpen ni….. orang yang bace leh tangkap feel kire da bjaye r 2 hsilkan cerpen best…. go! go!chaiyo!!!
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improve your english.. it would b better if the english written is grammatically correct..
keep on writing.. enjoyed it..
ketentuan lagu ramlah ram….akak ramlah…hehe
ya allah best gle cpen nie…thru ati i cm i plak kt tmpt ayunie 2..:d:d:d…kn bgus klu 2 cte i…8-}8-}8-}8-}8-}
ya allah best gle cpen nie…thru ati i cm i plak kt tmpt ayunie 2..:d:d:d…kn bgus klu 2 cte i…8-}8-}8-}8-}8-} thanks a lot to siti rahmah…i really loved it:x:x:x:x:x
Assalamualaikum everyone…
thanks yann, are, ima & shasha…
are : thanks 4 d comment…my grammar was really bad…i know already…but as u know, in harvard n oxford…it doesnt matter with grammar n spelling as long as people can read n undrstand what u write about…n actually i dont really care with my grammar coz, i’m not a writter, i just wrote this cerpen coz i love cerpen n enjoyed with it….n as a programmar, it doesnt matter with all d grammar…heheheh…BUT…thank u so much….i accept ur opinion….thanks…
ima : when i wrote this cerpen, lagu tu belum keluar lagi rasanya…hehehehehehehe
shasha : i doakan this story is yours…amiiiinnnn…
:-?mmmm cam mimpi lak
😡 cun gile citer ni….
lg heronya y setenang air lalu
bole tbuai huhu:-|
minat gak nak sent
tp camne eh?:-?
wah..touching lah..heheh..
citer yang best dan terharu..
sangant romantik dan tertarik..
:-?/:)8-|:x=|:”>:((:((:((:((:((:((:((:((
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nurul sedey sgt la dia nie…
meh sini meh..
man kesat2 kan air mata tu…:-|:-|:-|
8-|8-|8-|8-|
mglabah r ko nurul hidayah nak touching mendenye
ngok
ngek!
cool…
hehehehehhe…
love to read all d comments….
thanks…
law suka, lain kali datang ler lagi…
siti laks ler komen2 kat cini, k??
hai siti rahmah. love ur story but i hv to agree with are. it’s really annoying when ur reading a nice story but there’s a lot of grammatical mistakes. klu nk mnulis dlm 2 bhs, i.e BM & English, kene ler well verse dlm dua2 sekali. baru la seronok kiter bace story tu & e2 gak mnunjukn penulis tu sorg yg bwibawa & byk knowledge. u don’t hv to graduate frm overseas uni to be a good writer but do a lot of readings in both languages to improve urself.
I myself love reading novels, Malay or English. So it’s important to master ur language b4 u start writing, k? hopefully u won’t be disheartened by my comments. keep it up & hopefully one day u can be a good writer, insya-allah.
dis story realy2 sweet daaa….i luv dis story…:):x
law ade citer2 besh ag, kongsi2 ler kat sini…
bertuahnya ayunie iryanie dpt suami yg romantik mcm zafrul izhar…
I realy2 luv dis story!:x:@};-:x@};-:x@};-:x@};-:x@};-:x@};-:x@};-:*
cte awk best r siti rahmah!:)@};-%%-@};-%%-@};-%%-@};-%%-
Assalamualikum qiqi anura,
thanks 4 d comment…i’ll try my best to improve my language….
sebenarnya kalau nk tggu smpai kite nie benar2 master lm penulisan / bahsa or ect baru boleh nak mula menulis..sorry to say, sangat2 tak bersetuju…kalau kta tak mula sekarang…then nobody correct u(like u correct me) till d end pun kita tak kan berjaya & takkan tahu mana silap dan salah kita…
even chef wan pun bukan terus tiba2 jd no1 chef…rite….
frm bottom of my heart…thank u soooo much….kita tak kan berjaya kalau takde org band/puh kita…
to hunny luna, slver plannet & miera….thanks…..
saya akan cube send lagi love story kalau ade….
sebab now on…sgt2 sibuk dgn project…
i’m semi final programming student…writting is just a hobby where i can share wif people like all of u..hehehehe…thanks…
welcome~!
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welcome!:):):)
hye siti, u r welcome. citer awk ni besh. klu dikembangkn jd novel mesti sweet citer die, kn?
sy pon ade terasa nk mnulis tp idea2 tu x nk mnyinggah kat kepala otak ni? y ar?:-?:-?:-?
velum sampai masa…
time ade idea tuh wat ler… erm..
erm, klu tulis kisah kiter camne?:-?
erm, cambesh jugak, hehe.. 😡
amboi, suker dier=|=|=|=|=|
bleh tahan la…
bleh dapat royalty tak nt???ngeh3
tu nk kene finds out kat mama & papa teddy;):x
ngeh, kene bodek diowang ler nih, nampaknyer, hhu…
haa…tu keje awk ek?;)
nnt kiter g shopping b2 ye..
x pown g honeymoon ke;):x
em best lah citer nie…:x:”>:):”>:x;)(*)@};-@};-@};-
to qiqi anura & silver_planet : u all soooo funny….buleh ape nk buat cerita sendiri….bukan siapa pun tahu yg tu cerita tntng diri awak….semoga akan ada cerpen/karya oleh qiqi anura….Insyallah…
wish u all d best…
to eisya : tq so much…..
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boleh juga, huahuauahauhua…
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cam perli ajewk, cik akak…
hmmm…tgk la siti, klu ade idea nk mnyinggah ni. si silver tu wat2 shy2 cat jew. aritu ms qiqi suggest kat die, bkn main suker ag dier. siap nk mintak royalti ag kat mr & mrs teddy. don’t shy2 ar my dear:x
haha, malu ah… :”>
mmmm…ni apesal plak ni? nk manje2 ek?:-?;)
mmm…apesal ni? nk manje2 ek?;);):x
hehe, cam tak iase laks, huhu… 😡 =| 😉 :d
hehe, cam tak biase laks, huhu… 😡 =| 😉 :d
oooo, malu nk ckp ek? mao tp malu le ni?;)) awk ade ym x? bleh sembang ngan qiqi anytime…:d
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mana ade perli…betul lah tu…
mendoakan lagie ada…
seronok sgt2 baca komen qiqi anura & silver_planet…
memang peminat setia tentangcinta ye….
Tahniah!!
hahahahah:o
xprcaye siot….
romantik giler…:x
kuikuikui..
tabik spring kt ko…:x[Comment ID #18518 Will Be Quoted Here]
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haha, peminat setia tuh takde ler, tapi leh la, ngeh2…
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qiqi masuk ler forum, kat situ ade, hehe…
hmm.. best gak cite ni.. sweet jer.. wlupun ade some2 part yg xbape jelas.. tpi mungkin tu mmg teknik penulis utk bgi saspens sket dlm kite menerima maksud yg tersirat dlm cite die.. yela.. lain org lain cara pemahaman die.. cth nye psl gmbr pompuan tu.. terserah kpd pembace tu sndiri nk kate pompuan tu adik die ke,bekas awek die ke,sepupu ke.. sape2 pon boleh.. penulis ni memberi ruang utk otak kite brfikir dan membuat kesimpulan sendiri.. jadi citer pun x plain jer.. xkan sume nk kene ade jwpan kn.. ape2 pon.. tabik spring kt penulis cite ni.. anda mmg berbakat.. idea bagus.. cume B.I tu perlu d perbaiki sket.. *maaf klu menyinggung penulis* sy harap anda akan terus berkarya.. all the best! chayo! n gambatte! peace.. salam..
love this story….
i wish it could be happens to me?
cute luv story… :)>-
Terharunyeeee… The best cerpen!!!
terdapat ejaan yg salah…jangan rojakkan bahasa..tp cerita yg menarik..teruskan
sangat menarik….
i like ur story siti…
tp tak semuanye indah…
sungguh bhgie klu ada org yg betul2 sayangkan kte luar dan dalam…
wah!!!
so sweet cter ney..
smbil bce,bley plak g gelak sowg2 kn?? 😆
hahahhahahah
wah citer nie tak wat aku sdey langsung…
SWEET SNGT!!!!
berbunga hatiku…
x asyik sedey memnjng je kan…
sweet sngt…
huhu~~
bes sngt… citer sperti ini yg kutunggu2 sekian lmernyer…
very(x1000000) sweet!!!!!!!!
lamh jantung… 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 :XO: :XO: :XO: :XO: :XO:
~ sweet sngt citer 2…
~ rse cm nk nanges je.. :halo:
~ ble la nk kne kt dri sndri ea..
~ dpt cnte yg d tentukn Illahi… 🙂
it so sweet..cyte neyh besh sgt..andai saja dpt cinta sebegitu..aku syunk an kekasihku..die la cinta sejati ku awal dan akhir..maafkan daku selama percintaan kita yunk sntiasa diduga..cimie.. 😥 :XO:
😀 😀 😀 so sweet… XD 😆
dari 5 bintang bg 3..
jln cher di mmg bes
tp ad kureng gak..
tp klu jd dlm hidup kita nie alangkah beshnya
mmg brann sunggoh la dia punya lect nie..
mula2 men msg ja..
habaq nama ke2
pahtu bwu habaq nama ful
aku ja xdak sapa nak
huhuhuuh 😥 😥 😥
sweet la cerite ney..
kalaula aku dpt cinta mcm ney insyaallah aku blh bahagia…
Nice stry…thniah wt siti fatimah 😀
best lah cerita nie..
terharu aku bl membaca nya..
best nya klu aku dikurnikan cinta yg ikhlas sepertimana zafrul dan ayunie kan…
betul tu…tak semuar orang dpt cinta seperti ini..
😡 😥 😈
:up: bestnye…..suke la i cte2 cmni..
hehe…i dapat bygkan betapa ensemnye zafrul izhar tu..
cte ni wat i senyum je sampai habis bce..thanks..
erm tp rasenye cinta dalam citer ni cinta yg memandang pd paras rupe je..coz die x kenal pon lg si ayunie tu kn,perangai die sume, alih2 nak ajak kawen..huhu..ade ke jd di alam nyata ni citer cmni, kalo ade so sweet..neway, nice trial siti fatimah..
Sweetnya citer nie.. :XO:
bez cgt2 cerpen2 kat cni.. 😀
Assalamualikum…
y buena tardes…
hehehhe
lamanya tak singgah laman nie..
winduuuuuuuuuuuuuuu….
thanks to all comments…
thanks you sooo much….
Nuerol:: siti rahmah not fatimah,..
hehehehhehe
daisy:: bukan org slalu ckp dr mata turun ke hati???
sebagaimana cinta zulaikha pada Nabi Sulaiman…
tp lama2..peribadi jugak jd taruhan kan???
hehehhehehe
kan zfrul tu lect die..
sblm die aak kawin die slalu perhatikan ayunie kan???
die slalu msg kan???
dr situ die berani buat pertaruhan ajak berkahwin…
dlm cerpen..kite tak perlu mentioned semua nie..
tu sbb ia d pnggil cerpen…
nnti tggu sy tulis novel..1 satu sy tulis..
(kalaw sy tulis novel lah…)
hahahahahhahahahahahah
hahahahhahahahahhahahah
😀 bestnyer cite nie..
:up:
best la citer ni..rase nak tsenyum stiap ari.. 😳 ..
best cite ni…sweeeeeettt!!!!mcm gula2……i like..! :up:
SALAM…
SERONOK BACA CERITA KETENTUAN INI..MENYENTUH HATI..SETIAP PERKATAAN YG DIBACA PADA CEIRTA INI,MEMBUATKN SYA TERINGAT AKAN SI DIA…
cerpen yg best!congrats!keep it up.
sweet story..
i like…..best giler…
bes glew cte dia
best!
:XO: 😐 😀 :up:
:xo:so sweet…
:XO: 😀 ❗ :up: 💡 😐 ::-*: 😛 😥
wah !!!bez la cita niyh…klu la ada dak laki wat cam tu at ak…mau ak terjun bangunan saat tu jgk…hehehe :p
cerita best…. tpi grammar byk salah….
senang bisa menemukan blog ini 🙂
slam kenal keluarga teddy 🙂
nice story. tp grammar kene polish lagi 🙂